I am what I love about your poem is the gravitation it gives and the attentiveness of the wording. One part of your artwork that stands out is where the brain has different words and emotions pointing at it, affecting it/ the person. Another part that I enjoy is where the extra artistic add-ons. An example is a head with a large blast in the bag, conveying a brain burst of thoughts. Your poem reminds me of something that I made once. One time I wrote a poem talking about my personal thoughts and Ideas and how mental health was a very closet thing for men. Thanks for your Zine I look forward to seeing what you make next because it speaks about a valid message. Mens mental health should be spoken about more in our society.
One part of your Zine that stood out to me was the subject of it i think this is kinda sad because i feel it affects a lot of people and it affects students especially
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