Dear Keyonna Long :
I am Confused by your Zine, “ My last survival,” because… I was not able to properly read A lot of your text. I feel like your background images make it hard to read.
One part of your zine that stands out for me is where You bring light to the horrible crimes that happened to “Camila Diaz Cordova”. I think this is great because… While you are talking about your own experiences, you brought light to some horrible crimes that happened, and how you took inspiration from her poem.
Another part that I liked is where you wrote your own poem. This stood out for me because I really enjoyed reading it. I love the use of questions in your poem, and it made reading it interesting.
Thanks for your zine. I look forward to seeing what you make next because I truly enjoyed reading your poem and would like to hear more from you.
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