"My Trauma From Gun Violence" Posted by Jonathan Byrd in English 3 · Burrows-Stone · X on Friday, October 21, 2022 at 12:06 pm Comments (1) Qaydu Emdur Dear: Jonathan I am impressed with your poem, "My Trauma From Gun Violence" because you directly addressed the reader. You also styled it like a story. One part of your poem that stands out for me is how you used perspective. I think this is interesting because it makes it more engaging. Another part that I liked is the use of statistics in your essay. This stood out for me because it gives raw data about the topic. Your drawing reminds me of something that I made once. One time when I was working on an history project in 9th grade, I had to draw a thing that represented something like yours. It was very literal too, similar to yours. Thanks for your zine. I look forward to seeing what you make next, because I enjoyed your zine. And I think it was comprehensive. Log in to post a comment.
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