Dear: Jalen
I am moved by your poem "Am I Another one" because I liked your descriptive imagery. I also liked your usage of similes.
One part of your artwork that stands out for me is the colors you used. I think this is interesting because you used the colors to contrast the different faces.
Another part I liked was where you included the gravestones and names of the victims of police brutality. This stood out for me because I thought was interesting and added alot to your artwork.
Thanks for your zine. I look forward to seeing what you make next because I appreciated your work. As well as your usage of imagery and similes.
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