Think Before You Post

Source of my story :http://puresight.com/Real-Life-Stories/phoebe-prince.html


My story is on this girl named Phoebe. One day she got asked to a school dance by a senior, and she accepted his offer. Some girls got jealous because she was asked by a football senior. They started to cyber bully her and say horrible things to her. So the night before her winter dance she decided to hang herself.


The immediacy in this story is that they kept calling her names on social media and they wouldn't stop. This story permanence is that everything that they said on social media, was still on social media so anyone could see what was going on and agree or even disagree. Finally her lack of control was that their was no way for her to take any of it down because she didn't have control of their messages and she couldn't stop it. The only thing that came to her mind of stopping it was death.


I believe that if I was Phoebe I wouldn't have killed myself because of death. I wouldn't think that that's a way to solve anything, I would of informed an adult that can help me with this situation. If that didn't work I would ask them to stop. And if that didn't work either I would talk to someone who would be able to shut down the whole website. I watched a movie about a girl getting cyber bullied and she attempted to kill herself but luckily her friend stopped her and at the end of the story the people who where bullying her had left her alone after she got help. To me the moral of the story is to not kill yourself because people say rude things because anything that you do people will hate on you, so be yourself and have fun with your life.

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