I am intrigued by your poem because it rhymes and sounds beautiful. It also includes figurative language which is always good because it leaves the reader thinking.
One part of your artwork that stands out is where your pictures match your topic. I think this is great because it shows that you took your time to incorporate relevant photos to go along with your topic.
Another part that I liked is where the Earth had two different sides. This stood out for me because it shows our Earth now and what our Earth could turn to.
Thanks for your art. I look forward to seeing what you make next because it helped me learn a lot about your topic. Next time I'll be ready to learn more so I could help change the Earth
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